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Eye by ~Salva-Veritate:iconSalva-Veritate:



"I"
Personalization.
Perpetration.
Self.

Selfishness, Innocence.
Dichotomy of motivations.
Movements.
Choice.

Lust it,
this single letter.
Seemingly worth shedding blood for.
Destroying empires and
entire civilizations.

"We", "Us"?
Hah. Repulsive.
Do not give up
what may otherwise be for oneself!!

Me.
Yes!hah.
Risk it all
for ultimate glory!

Let us bask in our ego,
destroy every other runner!
Win the rat race

Scurry along moribund avaracious souls...

                          ...and let us die for an ultimaltely meaningless
                                           and hollow cause.
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The mocking of men's greed.
(and by men I do mean all mankind.)

**critique is greatly appreciated <3

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~NINTheFragile:iconNINTheFragile: May 15, 2008, 3:46:18 PM
beautifully written... great work

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"Feel the breath slip away from the lung and let life fly away on its broken wings"
-NINTheFragile-
~Salva-Veritate:iconSalva-Veritate: May 15, 2008, 4:41:25 PM
You think so?
Well, thanks. ^^

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“Does feminist mean large unpleasant person who'll shout at you or someone who believes women are human beings. To me it's the latter, so I sign up.”

~Margaret Atwood
~Emocienne:iconEmocienne: May 28, 2008, 9:21:23 PM
Mankind.
We have the keys to our destiny, to our dreams, to our beliefs and everything else. It is us who make the world.
You sum it all up in this poem. Good job.

--
The endless nights
In the moonlight, we do gather
We curse uncertainty and false desires
We lift the mask
and stand together - one and all
and when the flames grow dim, look within
Unleash the Fire...
~Salva-Veritate:iconSalva-Veritate: May 29, 2008, 8:14:37 AM
Thanks, lol I thought this poem really sucked bleh : )

--
“Does feminist mean large unpleasant person who'll shout at you or someone who believes women are human beings. To me it's the latter, so I sign up.”

~Margaret Atwood