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Strong Girl, Better Woman by ~Salva-Veritate:iconSalva-Veritate:



Kissing the air with every breathe you give
Closing your eyes, untainted by the lies
Speaking softly with your gaze
Flushed cheeks, revel in purity

Revealing innocence from your heart
Handing it over and mind and soul, careful
Have no idea of what you'll become
Strong girl, better woman than anyone

You step through mud and soil
Spirit undiluted like water and oil
Unkissed by the mirror of an altered image
Unwilling to fall in their pit of norm

Beautiful punk,  prep, or church girl
Don't let them tell you what makes you just right
A size 2, a 7, a 15, or 20
The jealous words of others have slayed many

Don't look in the mirror and see what they say
You're clairvoyant and  lovely to their dismay
To you woman, I write you an ode of love
Resilient as a hawk and delicate as a dove

Move forward, undaunted soul entrancingly flaunted.
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A poem dedicated to all woman, by a female
who knows all the well the struggles we often face <3

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*Mallardx:iconMallardx: May 17, 2008, 2:56:28 PM
Well said.

You are doing a lot on this subject lately.

M-
~Salva-Veritate:iconSalva-Veritate: May 17, 2008, 4:34:48 PM
Yeah, well, I'm only a female aren't I? xD rofl. It's just a subject I've been readin up alot on because I'm writing my term paper on the ideology America holds of women.

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“Does feminist mean large unpleasant person who'll shout at you or someone who believes women are human beings. To me it's the latter, so I sign up.”

~Margaret Atwood
*Mallardx:iconMallardx: May 17, 2008, 7:27:34 PM
Sounds like you are on your way to an "A" grade.

M-
~NINTheFragile:iconNINTheFragile: May 18, 2008, 8:20:32 PM
wow this is very well put together... I would of liked to see it end with the title just for that extra punch... but marvelous

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"Feel the breath slip away from the lung and let life fly away on its broken wings"
-NINTheFragile-
~Salva-Veritate:iconSalva-Veritate: May 20, 2008, 1:55:59 PM
lol thanks, I sure hope so!

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“Does feminist mean large unpleasant person who'll shout at you or someone who believes women are human beings. To me it's the latter, so I sign up.”

~Margaret Atwood
~Salva-Veritate:iconSalva-Veritate: May 20, 2008, 1:57:34 PM
lol I'll see if i'll do that ^^

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“Does feminist mean large unpleasant person who'll shout at you or someone who believes women are human beings. To me it's the latter, so I sign up.”

~Margaret Atwood